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Post by sondayar on Feb 1, 2010 0:03:00 GMT -5
Name: Son Dayar Age: 26 Gender: Male Race: Hybrid Saiyan Proposed Abilities: Burning Attack- Alot like Trunks' except it's red an orange
Kamehameha- Bigger than the average kamehameha and is red an orange, takes longer to charge.
Masenko- Is just like Piccolo's but is black and white
Final Shine Attack- Has an electric aura whenever used
Flight- basic flight abilities
ki energy- regular energy attacks including waves Biography: Was born 1000 years after Goku J.R. fought Vegeta J.R. and has learned under Master Roshi who has somehow still lived for all these years.Now Dayar has still been syccesfully finding sensei's all over the planet.
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Post by DBIL Administrator on Feb 2, 2010 1:48:57 GMT -5
A bit more description in the bio is highly appreciated, especially for those applying for a Hybrid Saiyan, they are quite obviously the more popular race. I'll give you some pointers: -Who is his ancestor? All Hybrid Saiyans must have an ancestor, as they are near extinct and cannot spawn from nowhere -How did he find Muten Roshi? -How did he learn the Final Shine? -How did he learn the Burning Attack? -What was his childhood like? Peaceful? Chaotic? or maybe you'd like to go with the good old orphan story. -What is his personality like? -How did he manage to train his abilities above the average human level? Yeah, these little details need to be filled in if you wish to play a Hybrid Saiyan  |
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Post by Calico Nerdani on Feb 2, 2010 16:36:05 GMT -5
I agree with the Admin here. He needs a bit of a backstory. What's he like? Is he a jerk to everyone, or is he a loveable loudmouth, like me? What happened to his family? Does he have any pets? He should have a cat. A talking cat!
Also, you should make your own moves, even if they're just copies but with differences. The Black & white masenko could be Salt & Pepper Beam! The Burning Attack could be Inferno Buster, and the Final Shine can be.... um.... Aftershave?
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